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(let go)
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:46:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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complete submission
to punishment
can't be too picky
take what you can get
physical
mental
emotional or...
nothing sweeter
than the taste of your own blood
addicted to the sic(sic)
in you like a John
at some nameless truck stop
don't want him
don't want to be there
but you have to
you must
it's all a part
of the greater annihilation
burning the effigy of Self
destroying the star
that you paint over your reflection
mirror becomes the enemy
throws back reality, you don't wanna see
and in the end you're nothing more
than the fears that hold you back
(let go)
it's just a little pain
and it's worth every drop of blood
(give up)
fall farther than you ever have
spread your wings and pretend to fly
even as you hit the ground
(ignore the feelings)
let the love inside just wither away
emotional atrophy
sentimentless abortion
(the pain is only as real as you make it)
behind your eyes is every key
unlock the cage and free the beast
take the pain like air until it's just automatic
edification is your reward
as everything else just dies
(embody the Ugly
extinguish your faith
step beyond obsessive reflection
throw out your arms and drown in the pain
emerge a hollow phoenix
with blinding light for eyes
show humanity it's own black heart
and laugh as it all just dies)
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2004-06-20 23:46:08]
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Re: (let go)
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by eatfresh22 on
Sunday, 20th June 2004 @ 11:56:01 PM AEST
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Dark poem full of trickery. I thought it was crazy how you talk so much about deceiving yourself...nothing good every comes from that. One can only live in ignorance for so long before reality hits.
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Re: (let go)
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by RonMiller on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:02:12 AM AEST
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I feel something more than what's on the
surface of your poetry..I like the way you
write very much..
Ron |
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Re: (let go)
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 06:17:14 PM AEST
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this is wierd, but amazing as always. I liked your exceptionally strong writing in this poem. Very well done.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: (let go)
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 24th September 2004 @ 08:12:02 AM AEST
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| simply, fantastic. |
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