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Tears won’t come to push the pain aside.
Contributed by
little_genna
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 04:57:21 AM in AEST
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Why do I slip into this state,
Almost just feeling hate,
Yet want nothing more than to hide,
For time to ride.
I keep these feelings bottled up inside.
Maybe its time to they died.
Feeling like such a slut,
With nothing left to cut.
I try to express my hidden pain,
Just to keep myself sane.
Yet this does not seem enough.
It is all way too tough.
Many people hear my words,
Yet do they really read the meaning in my words.
There may be an obvious meaning, yet that is not the one.
That’s just not how things are done.
Cried I have tried.
Yet the tears won’t come to push the pain aside.
What I need is a hug.
To feel warm, safe and snug.
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Re: Tears won’t come to push the pain aside.
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by deathdrop on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 06:50:45 AM AEST
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hey!! thats just how i have been feelng lately too!
especially yeserday.
today's ok though...
i hope that you're feeling better now. |
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Re: Tears won’t come to push the pain aside.
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:01:06 AM AEST
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Awwwwww (((((HUGS))))) I know this feeling very well, you have great talent
pixie xx |
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Re: Tears won’t come to push the pain aside.
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by SweetRhythm on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:29:18 AM AEST
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auh this is so sad lil-genna, I hope that you will pick yourself up soon. This was a really good write that you put your all into. Very real & full of emotion. Gripping. Thanks for sharing, feel beter soon.
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Re: Tears won’t come to push the pain aside.
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:15:54 AM AEST
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**hugs** im here if you need or want to talk, this is wonderfully written, genna, your point comes across loud and clear:) more hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Tears won’t come to push the pain aside.
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by Lost_Shadow on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 10:57:59 AM AEST
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hey hun, this one I can really feel your pain in. I wish I could feel this way sometimes. You know where I am when ever you do need a hug.
*-; Jiae ;-* |
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