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Blonde Haired Beauty
Contributed by
MDodgen
on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:37:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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i walk with you
in fields of
red roses
dream with me
whisper your hopes
straight into
my soul
blonde haired beauty
your aura is too
strong for me
i get pulled
towards you
my heart pounds
my knees weak
washing me in
your radiance
lay with me in
in waves of lust
let me fondle you
fulfill your desires
smooth your ripples
make time stand still
eyes shining
hearts pounding
when it's done
you'll know
just how much
i care
Copyright ©
MDodgen
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2004-06-21 11:37:30]
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Re: Blonde Haired Beauty
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:39:49 AM AEST
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great poem Melenie,
pixie xx |
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Re: Blonde Haired Beauty
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by Kusko on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:46:01 AM AEST
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| It's not bad, really... Try using stronger verbs and less cliches. |
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Re: Blonde Haired Beauty
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by shelby on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 01:39:22 PM AEST
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delightful
michelle |
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Re: Blonde Haired Beauty
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:04:39 PM AEST
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| very sweet, the softness of your words speaks to me. I can feel the emotions written in this one. great poem. A+++ |
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Re: Blonde Haired Beauty
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 18th July 2004 @ 10:59:48 PM AEST
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| great write. |
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Re: Blonde Haired Beauty
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by wikedladi on
Thursday, 11th August 2005 @ 06:36:14 PM AEST
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| This poem speaks volumes! Great write! ; ) |
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