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Suffering Ends
Contributed by
MDodgen
on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:53:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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eyes closed
heart pounding
tears drip
heart shatters
shoulders shaking
sobs continue
bones breaking
blood flowing
pain strong
twitching legs
rolling eyes
breathing stops
darkness looms
body stops
soul free
suffering ends
for you
at least
Copyright ©
MDodgen
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2004-06-21 11:53:33]
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Re: Suffering Ends
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by pixie on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 12:01:34 PM AEST
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great write Mel, love reading your work
pixie xx |
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Re: Suffering Ends
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by holderofthestone on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:06:31 PM AEST
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| again a very intriuging placement. well done. your words are always intersting to read. A++++ |
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Re: Suffering Ends
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:30:58 PM AEST
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| interesting power in it's brevity |
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