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Just Like You've Left Me
Contributed by
Dead_Next_Tuesday
on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 03:28:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Mangled, like your favorite toy
Warped, like your perverse mind
Sadistic, like your wicked smile
Bloody, like your sliced up legs
Isolated, like your lonely life
Forgotten, like all your old worries
Alone, like your lost soul
Crimson, like your twisted insides
Morbid, like all the things you write
Cold, like your honest heart
Used, like all your old habits
Shattered, like every one of your dreams
Mistaken, like your deceiving mask
Dying, like your shell of a person
Unknown, like your every want
Murdered, like your best friends
Evil, like your darkest secrets
Yearning, like your aching heart
Broken, just like youve left me
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Dead_Next_Tuesday
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2004-06-21 15:28:10]
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Re: Just Like You've Left Me
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:26:08 PM AEST
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For some reason I really enjoyed this. I loved the endless string of similes made for an angry, rough, but enjoyable read.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Just Like You've Left Me
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by Kirby on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:17:10 PM AEST
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| This was the best dark poem that I have read for a very long time. I loved it very much and am gonna give u a 5 star on it. Great Write. Love::::Kirby |
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Re: Just Like You've Left Me
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:10:55 AM AEST
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great write
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