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Missing you
Contributed by
rollingon4you
on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:24:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Look down daughter of ours see the changes,time goes on once again in bloom are the flowers green are the trees and the lawn
Look down daughter of ours summer,winter,spring and fall see the changes with each year and hour still I look for you down the hall
Look down daughter of ours a baby sister and little brother are you watching from the ebony towers? And still missing you, your loving mother
And when we had the choice to sit it out or dance we all danced father,mother,daughter
Look down on us daughter cause we look up for you everyday.
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Re: Missing you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Trisha on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:29:05 PM AEST (User
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This Is Good I Like |
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Re: Missing you
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ilhar on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:01:50 PM AEST (User
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very well written
Shari |
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Re: Missing you
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:05:32 AM AEST (User
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great write
pixie xx |
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