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I Looked...I Saw...I Found
Contributed by
KittyGurl
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 05:52:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I look up, I see some birds
I look right, I see words
I look down, I see grass
I look left, I see a trumpet made of brass.
I peek in a corner, I see a pen
I look over, I see a hen
I turn around, I see some dew
I look staight, I finnaly see you.
I realize that you have always been there
But I seemed to not really care
I will look no more
You are what I have been looking for.
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KittyGurl
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2004-06-21 17:52:58]
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Re: I Looked...I Saw...I Found
(User Rating: 1 )
by morelikelyrics on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 12:29:13 PM AEST
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haha, for some reason this made me laugh, sorry if that bothers you...
*ahem* well, well written in any case. It is a wonder that we don't take in our surroundings, unaware that the one thing we've been longing for is right in front of our nose. Yes, but I do love the ending stanza. Again, well done.
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