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Twisted
Contributed by
EvaRee
on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:00:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Everything is so twisted
I'm torn between two
my heart is going
between the both of you.
I didn't want to
sit and watch you cry
we both knew it was happening
someone needed to say goodbye.
He just seems like the one
I've been searching for
so I have to take this chance
so I know for sure.
At the same time
I will always love you
you always come back
no matter what i seem to do.
Everything is just so twisted
nothing can i understand
but I'm pretty sure that now
I dont need to you hold my hand.
I think I've proved
that I'm cappable of being alone
that I dont need you anymore
and I can stand on my own.
I'm sorry I had to do this
and again make you cry
but it is time for me now
to spread my wings and fly.
Maybe one day
you will comprehend
why I did this
over and over again.
I just cant help
the way I truely feel
I'm sorry I make things twisted
it's just me being real.....
Copyright ©
EvaRee
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2004-06-21 20:00:39]
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Re: Twisted
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by Sordida on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 09:00:25 PM AEST
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| i really liked the emotion in this poem.IT's very strong. |
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Re: Twisted
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by BrandySwanson on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:05:02 PM AEST
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very emotional poem well done
Brandy |
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Re: Twisted
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:57:04 AM AEST
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very well expressed poem
pixie xx |
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Re: Twisted
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by RobertKilpatrick on
Saturday, 10th July 2004 @ 12:38:40 AM AEST
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| a lot of feeling here ... good write |
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Re: Twisted
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by xXAgainTwiceXx on
Thursday, 21st October 2004 @ 09:45:50 PM AEST
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Awesome write...so emotional...loved it.
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