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To You
Contributed by
Sordida
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:29:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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He told me not to die
When I was depressed
He caused it
Forever knowing what
Has never been
He said I should live
But I dont want to
He called me a deviant
In a good way
Ive always loved him
Dont believe anything I say
Im a liar and Im crooked
People would be so much better
If I werent here for corruption
Hes not cute or studly or anything
But look into his soul hes brilliant
While I just waste away
This had to happen
Oh yeah great
I told him Im meant to be alone
All these things he said to me
In the middle of the night
Copyright ©
Sordida
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2004-06-21 20:29:44]
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Re: To You
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by emystar on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:40:45 PM AEST
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Very strong write. don't really know how to respond to this write as it is very unique.
Hang tuff.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: To You
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by Kirby on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 08:58:06 PM AEST
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| Well this was a good poem from the very beginning and I enjoyed it. You can tell that there is alot of emotion there in this poem which makes it very good. Great Poem. Love::::Kirby |
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