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precious
Contributed by
fallensilence
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Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:40:57 PM in AEST
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Everything reminds me of the desire left in me
Ive made it so obvious that it seems to be shrouded
I speak of sunsets and beauty
And it only reminds you of all the time you wasted
All the waste time spent on me
You were the only precious thing Ive ever held
And I only had you for such a short time
Well if I had a soul to sell
Id hand it over for you to be mine
So heres to new beginnings that never start right
Heres to that night that we spent inside
Your parents house
When I failed to understand
That I was never part of your heart
And all the damaged that you could have done
Would have been better than leaving me alone
The instructions on my back say
you need only to cut once, straight across the wrist
But I dont need to live any longer
Cause the pain Ive felt is more than a lifetimes worth
I pray to god that there was something you could do
But Im lost now.
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Re: precious
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:48:01 AM AEST
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Deeply moving and grievous. Well penned.
But please see the pain and darkness through. See it as an offer to become truer. This kind of thing is like refining fire when you want to learn from it. Look to God for comfort. He will help you through.
Take care now.
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