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Thoughtless
Contributed by
frejya
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:40:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
mystical
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Thoughtless me
Too much to take
Too little to break
Probably when God sent me to this earth
He never noticed I was incomplete
As errors I see
When I take a tour of myself
I find some places so vacuum
That they stop my breath
When they never lived
Why do they accuse me
Of strangling them to death?
When I give it a thought
I feel so thoughtless
That my thoughts think
Of accusing me
Of forcing their thinking
To thoughtlessness
By not thinking.
Oh! What traitors
These thoughts who think in the thoughtless me.
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frejya
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2004-06-22 01:40:43]
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Re: Thoughtless
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by mountainhigh on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 05:34:49 AM AEST
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As I read I see, the mirror image of myself, and hang my head in shame, thoughtless is how I've acted and I thank you for reminding me.
Excellent poem, thank you.
Chris |
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Re: Thoughtless
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by Luinil on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:04:15 AM AEST
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| very creative and unique, very enjoyable read * |
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Re: Thoughtless
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:10:31 AM AEST
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a great poem, well done to you
pixie xx |
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