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Home Truths
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 04:23:45 AM in AEST
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Two steps forward
Three steps back
One look up, as if not to look back
Try and say sorry when youll only do worse tomorrow
Trying to shed away my tears when youre the provider of all my sorrow
Come to me like you actually care, when my enemies have been nicer
The way things are going, you could cut the atmosphere with a slicer
So what is the point in this grief stricken pain
When all either of us do is just sit here and complain
Its all very well to dream of a garden
But if we dont sew the seeds
All we will be picking is weeds
So lets site down and count the trees
Trim of the old bits and make room for new leaves
Lets be positive and clean up well
If we are going to make this work
We will have to dust, clean and tell
So lets do it together and do it well
Pick up the pieces so that us together can dwell
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Re: Home Truths
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 04:35:35 AM AEST
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Very good writing. If two people work together u can move mountains.
Stay positive, it's bound to rub off.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Home Truths
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by poetrygodslove on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 06:14:16 AM AEST
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| It is nice that your looking around seeing what needs to be done. liked how you put these words together.. good poem. hope it all works out for ya. sandy |
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Re: Home Truths
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:44:57 AM AEST
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very well expressed poem...... love your work ,
pixie xx |
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