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I Hate
Contributed by
Alyshia
on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:03:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Look in the mirror and what do I see?
A face of sorrow who hates being me
I pull on my hair with frustration
I stare at my reflection with confusion
My eyebrows aren't thin
My best feature isn't my grin
I don't consider myself pretty
But now I consider myself petty
I hate what I see in my reflection
I see my face full of rejection
I try to look past what meets the eye
But all I can see is a dark dull sky
My sould is sleeping
My spirit is weeping
My friends might not be my friends at all
Or I might be paranoid is all
I don't know what's real or what I imagine
But I can feel the end of a friendship
Once again paranoia wins over me
I can't let myself go, I can't get free
I'll always hate myself
I'll always hate everything
I've never been able to appreciate the inner beauty of things
My parents always sucked at parenting
I hope one day
I'll find a way
To accept things for what they are
And most of all
Accept myself
Mind, body, and heart
Copyright ©
Alyshia
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2004-06-22 07:03:37]
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Re: I Hate
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:42:13 AM AEST
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wow, very powerful, self acceptence is the hardest thing to do,I am still battling on with it , I am sure that in time you will love yourself,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: I Hate
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by Vermillion on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:47:00 AM AEST
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really pulls at your heart strings a very beautiful piece i loved it
~vermillion~ |
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Re: I Hate
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by cauchy3 on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 03:18:19 PM AEST
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| Very good shaped shapping poem. Good move and pretty emotions which reflex my nerve----by cauchy3 |
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Re: I Hate
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by deadbloodyrose on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 12:18:57 AM AEST
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| everything sucks.. except ur poem.. i really liked it.. AMI JO |
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