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Hong kong poem by cauchy3
Contributed by
cauchy3
on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 07:19:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
political
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Hong Kong (poem)
Famous dolls are hands to the powers bullets
Lack of hearts and apathy in the human
You are inside contexts of poor of onions
Nothing is seeing
Mud in river bottoms are thicken models
Inconsistent waters and mud are flowing
Laws opposed my feet as one opening drama
Facts are not ruling
Contacted wires in mains are in place of pulsing
Reasons stressed in laws are in mists from outers
Rebate add with interests are loads in efforts
Moneys are lacking
Nail the fire down eagerly like the waters
Foods are need in poverty like the farming
Ears and voices are vital in lives of human
Weaknesses are purposes
Foxes in jungles chewing up meats to move on
Men with maces in masculine states of being
Gifts from mother rule out all good and evilness
Lots to be flattered
Times assure us going on tips of towers
Trends are something being as plans by natures
Tracks are track in tricks of us added our suffers
Moments are sudden
Patch wear on red in one greenish meadow
Greens are eager ones who have circling powers.
Lands are share of happens in number of goodness
Free us from spooling
Spools have evil tortures to threads in wiring
Hubs are peels of bananas slipping over
Locks are strike and full with the stress in coding
Strands are in upsides
Homes are real as living on can s of little
Cages are homes build inside flats of mansions
Boxes are paper turning out cold in shelters
Papers are not moneys
by cheung shun sang=cauchy3=laplace181
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Re: Hong kong poem by cauchy3
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by Thivanka on
Sunday, 27th June 2004 @ 01:40:32 AM AEST
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That was GOOD! The most interesting piece I have read in quite some time, I loved the way you ended each stanza too. You have quite a diverse style of writing, both absorbing and intricate. Nice work, again!
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Re: Hong kong poem by cauchy3
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by reprobate on
Monday, 26th July 2004 @ 06:29:08 PM AEST
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hey, you should read the poetry of charles bukowski. i think you might enjoy some of his writings.
interesting read.
thanks for sharing |
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