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Pain
Contributed by
Alyshia
on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:40:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Dull gray skies
Remind me of my life
Feelings of hate and resentment
Swarm together and end up pent up
Broken clouds
Create heavy rain
Much like broken hearts
Cause lots of pain
I finally think I'm over you
Then something happens to remind me of you
Then my depression renews itself
And I start to hate myself
I can't stand to look at my reflection
My eyes are filled with moist rejection
I've lost control of everything
I don't even own my own dreams
You created this pain
So only you can take it away
I'll just wait for you to realize
You've made a painful mistake
I'm looking forward to the day
When I'll be free of all this pain
But that day seems so far away
Copyright ©
Alyshia
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2004-06-22 08:40:26]
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Re: Pain
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by Alyshia on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:43:31 AM AEST
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| the note at the top should say: Please comment on whether the line 'my eyes are filled with moist rejection' makes you think of tears when you first read it...thank you. |
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Re: Pain
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 09:06:10 AM AEST
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| yes, I thought of tears - emotional write |
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Re: Pain
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:06:28 PM AEST
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Very touching...Good write.
Jenni |
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