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Sweet Tooth Junkie
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 09:06:33 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sweet and sour, sugar or salty
Chocolate coated, creamy strawberry
Vanilla flavour, pineapple tango
Orange strawberry, exotic mango
Apple crumble, rhubarb tart
Peakin pie, apple fry
Fudge corner, creamy pie
Carmel slice, Ill take that twice
Coconut bite with a Turkish delight
Oh, not just yet, one more thing
A dozen donuts, with some chocolate topping
I see right now there is no use in stopping
Give me ice-cream to go
With a cream caramel flow
Yes ok, I think Im done for now
Until my taste buds come knocking and they ask me how
How, when I give them so much care and attention,
They still crave more and more for sweet loving affection
Well, I confess I dont really mind
So whenever they want, I will soothe and caress them with all sweet things I find
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Re: Sweet Tooth Junkie
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 09:40:22 AM AEST
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How true your words -
Until my taste buds come knocking and they ask me how
How, when I give them so much care and attention,
They still crave more and more for sweet loving affection
you understand and depict so well! |
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Re: Sweet Tooth Junkie
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by SnowB on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:31:25 AM AEST
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Yummy!..lol...I love this! Made my mouth water for some of these tasty treats...wonderful poem.
Lena |
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Re: Sweet Tooth Junkie
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:38:18 PM AEST
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omg this is great! I was already craving chocolate...now i'm just craving anything sweet!
Great write
please comment on mine too
Summer |
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Re: Sweet Tooth Junkie
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 03:28:37 PM AEST
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im hungry..
PFR |
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Re: Sweet Tooth Junkie
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by Glo on
Monday, 24th January 2005 @ 09:21:35 AM AEST
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| HELP! I'm in dire need of a Dentist.;) A most sweet and delectable write. I'm diabetic, and this sent my sugar soaring.LOL! I enjoyed this one very much. Oh but the final sweets are always best.:) Great write. Take good care...Glo! |
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