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Remember
Contributed by
MDodgen
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:51:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Remember the first time we met?
Me spoken for, you patiently waiting.
Remember the first time we kissed?
The world dropped away, no one but us.
Remember our first night together?
Your skin on mine, endless bliss.
Remember our first date?
Seperate yet so together, heart and soul.
Remember how we used to just kiss?
Laying for hours, bodies woven together.
Remember when we used to sit for hours?
Making plans for our future together.
Remember the first time I said I love you?
Your eyes wide, my heart beaming.
Remember when we set up house?
Our dreams succeeding, our future started.
Remember when we said I do?
Our eyes shining, ours hearts so full.
Remember our honeymoon?
Us all smiles and handholding.
Remember the last five years?
Our ups and downs, our souls together.
Remembering all this,
I hope you remember why I love you so much.
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MDodgen
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Re: Remember
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:52:38 AM AEST
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Awwww Mel., what can I say this is so lovely, 5/5
pixie xx |
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Re: Remember
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by ceci on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:54:32 AM AEST
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Im glad you found the one you'll love for the rest of you life.
Nice poem
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Re: Remember
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 08:45:50 PM AEST
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| very sweet poem. full of emotion and love. I remember all of it, every second.... great write. A+++++ |
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Re: Remember
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 09:49:49 PM AEST
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This is so wonderfully tender and very sweet! YES! It's important to stop every now and again and just.... remember.
Lovely, lovely write!
SNM |
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