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Handle With Care
Contributed by
pixie
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:58:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Please handle me with care,
I am a porcelain teddy bear,
I need to cared for & I must be loved,
Shown affection by receiving a hug.
I am like a china doll,
Hurt & pain will quickly take toll,
If I am not looked after properly,
Please refrain from ever dropping me.
Show me you love me every day,
Dont leave me & dont throw me away,
I need your love forever more
Please tell me youll never shut your door?
I am delicate like a flower,
Give me your love in a shower,
Tell me youll always be there,
And that you are not going anywhere.
My heart is easily bruised,
Please dont leave me feeling used,
Cushion my heart with your passion,
Let me know your love is not on ration.
Please take me &hold me in your arms,
Keep me away from any sort of harm,
Squeeze me, adore me & hold me tight,
Make sure I sleep soundly all through the night.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2004-06-22 11:58:16]
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Re: Handle With Care
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by MDodgen on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 12:01:41 PM AEST
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I am delicate like a flower,
Give me your love in a shower,
Tell me you’ll always be there,
And that you are not going anywhere.
i love this symbolism. good write 4 stars |
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Re: Handle With Care
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by Shadow on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 12:06:43 PM AEST
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| I think we should all come with instructions. This is me. This was a very beautifal wright. It seems to have been well thought out. I love it. Keep it coming. If you wright anything like this again let me know. I'd love to read it. |
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Re: Handle With Care
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by ceci on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 12:21:14 PM AEST
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really nice poem
cecilia |
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Re: Handle With Care
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 12:28:22 PM AEST
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| I agree, well thought out, and clever. I enjoyed this. |
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Re: Handle With Care
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by lexxie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:56:39 PM AEST
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very nice poem loved it
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Re: Handle With Care
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by SweetRhythm on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:42:15 AM AEST
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Awh that was just so so sweet. What a beautiful peace of work by you pixie. You really put such great feeling behind this & it strenghens evey verse. I really loved it. 5/5 for sure.
Corinna |
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Re: Handle With Care
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by SnowB on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:34:57 AM AEST
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Oh...I love this one pixie...not afraid of showing your emotions...needing attention and tender loving care...very beautiful piece...
Lena |
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Re: Handle With Care
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 02:59:43 PM AEST
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beautifully written, your example is so much as is love, i think the world of this poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Handle With Care
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:43:31 AM AEST
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Beautiful. You're beautiful. I hope you recieve all you need.
All others in relationships should be adorn As you ask for here. God bless you. |
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