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The wall
Contributed by
Shadow
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 12:02:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Awake! Awake! To the gate
To seal the wall and our fate.
Unseen evil rules the night
That damns the world and dims our sight.
The Tower hails the midnight hour
The spawn reveals all its power!
The sight it brings no words hail
Fire burns the old wall frail.
To arms to arms the wall will fall
The shadows shall breach our loved hall!
Damn our sight of eyes and mind
The unknown is what we find!
Let shield shine and lights dear lust
Return the evil back to dust!
Let sword ride the heavens black
Let sword pierce and axe hack!
Fire burns the dark ones rise
They come to claim the new found prize.
Bones crack and mist turns red
The once proud wall is our final bed.
The hall falls beneath the sky
All we love is damned to die.
Copyright ©
Shadow
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2004-06-22 12:02:08]
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Re: The wall
(User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 12:03:33 PM AEST
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powerful write
pixie xx |
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Re: The wall
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by Baronhawk on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:05:26 PM AEST
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| A rather sad write, one that speaks of an evil ended foreboding. It has a tinged of a noble fight in it and yet it fails to resound as a worthy stand...somehow just sounds out as a futile fight. It would have been better as a memoreable last stand but I guess I expected that because of the title "The Wall". "The Fall" would have been better but a moving write nonetheless. Albeit one that brings a picture of utter hopelessness to mind. I dunno somehow it just brings this feeling of utter defeat to me...oh well. Nice write anyway. |
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