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Crying Out For Help
Contributed by
true_poetry_writer
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:43:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
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My blue skies turn to dark
my pain start to come
I'm begining to feel numb
is this where I belong?
in a world full of darkness
mind going insane
emotionally drained
constantly feeling pain
I'm trying to cry out for help
no ones there to reach my hand
I just don't understand
why not try to save my soul?
why not me?
I'm crying out for help
no one there to look my way
wishing and hopeing
they will reach out one day
I lay myself in bed and start to week
crying and screaming till I start to fall asleep
distracted by all my fears
feeling all alone
locked in a depressed zone
already feeling unknown
I'm crying out for help
why not me?
why not help me?
hold my hand
so I can be free
I'm crying out for help..help..help me
-Kim-
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Re: Crying Out For Help
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:56:40 PM AEST
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| i can really relate to this. a very strong and powerful piece. great poem. thank you for sharing* |
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Re: Crying Out For Help
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by Aika on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 02:46:32 PM AEST
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this is cruely sad!! i felt this your pain, and wish you did not feel it any more...
on the other hand.... i say "everything has sense, even those bad things" and i think about the sense of it.... cruel, painful..but makes sense..
WIshing you much easier times!! with love, aika:-)
PS: very very well written!!! |
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Re: Crying Out For Help
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 02:51:30 PM AEST
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great expression
pixie xx |
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