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my mistake
Contributed by
i_have_no_name
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:52:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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kill me painfully, murder me brutally, take my life away from you. steal my soul, torture my mind, make me pay for what i did to you. Do me a favour and rip my heart out, keep it forever never let it go. I don't deserve to live but my heart belongs to you, i made a promise and i love you. Leave my mind to rot, leave my body to bleed, i want you to see me cry, i want you to let me die.
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Re: my mistake
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by Black13 on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 01:56:19 PM AEST
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Very powerful write.
Nicely done. |
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Re: my mistake
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 02:00:58 PM AEST
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| really great write. very emotional. well done |
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Re: my mistake
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by reilt on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 02:01:54 PM AEST
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| really great write. very emotional. well done |
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Re: my mistake
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 04:55:32 PM AEST
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certainly holds a lot of powerful emotion.
nice job getting it out! |
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Re: my mistake
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by Broken_Skin on
Wednesday, 29th September 2004 @ 09:56:44 AM AEST
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This really got to me..
I think its deep and beautiful
5/5
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