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Worthless, Weak, and Alone
Contributed by
Knowledge
on
Sunday, 20th October 2002 @ 08:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Snowflakes fall upon my face.
I feel the cold hand of winter take hold of me.
It chills me. His touch is cold, dark, and alone.
That's what it is like when you are gone.
My heart grows cold, it becomes dark within me, and I am left alone.
Forever and I destined to wander this realm of lonliness?
I am worthless without you.
Never before have I done a good deed until I've made you smile.
I am weak without you.
Without you, I am so weak I can't believe in anything.
I think of you and how strong you are. I am so weak, my own will consumes me.
I am alone without you.
I long to be with you again. I feel so empty inside.
I have been alone too long. I want to feel the warm touch of love.
Just once...
I want to know what it feels like to be loved before I die.
Winters coldness has made me impure...insane for love.
The snow falls around me. It covers me in a blanket of eternity.
My heart solidifies. My body goes numb.
I feel as cold as a statue on a winters night.
As my body becmes stiff and cold, I look into the heavens with arms spread wide, inviting any love that would care to comfort me.
No love comes. No love comes from you either.
Standing in the field of eternity is a single statue. It defies to be smothered by time.
Everything else is covered.
So now you know the coldness within your heart can turn it into stone, making it imune to emotion. By keeping the coldness within your heart, and denying love, you can turn others to stone as well.
I, a statue, am worthless. I can do nothing.
I am weak. If I were to fall, I would break.
I am alone. I stand in the middle of an endless field of eternity...
alone.
Without you, I am worthless, weak, and alone.
Copyright ©
Knowledge
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2002-10-20 08:45:00]
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Re: Worthless, Weak, and Alone
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by cryingonmyporch on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 01:19:19 PM AEST
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| it's so sad to be alone |
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Re: Worthless, Weak, and Alone
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by norticus on
Tuesday, 22nd October 2002 @ 04:14:31 AM AEST
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You hurt me. I guess I'm just a little sensitive right now, but this poem really tore at my heart. It described how I feel better than I could have to myself so I give it a 5 on the Nortiscale.
Thank you
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Re: Worthless, Weak, and Alone
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by OreO on
Friday, 1st November 2002 @ 12:15:28 AM AEST
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This is so sad
Great write
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::. |
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