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Red Paged Flames
Contributed by
Wolfareen
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 03:20:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I have to go, I need to scream,
I close my eyes, I see, I dream.
My legs are moving, let them run,
But still I sit, runnings been done.
My pen flies for me, it overflows,
My legs get impatient while my brain glows.
My feet start tapping as I write and write,
I can't see anymore, nothing feels right.
This page is burning, red blood flame,
My hand won't/can/t stop, it's all the same.
Meaningless words pour out of my head,
"I hate you, I love you, I wish I were dead."
These strange little squiggles shout out how I feel,
I don't want to see them yet before them I kneel.
Glow from the paper shadows my face,
Emotions a time bomb; strong steel, soft lace.
My legs are dancing now, they need to go,
But my brain is numbing, it's ready to blow.
I HAVE to go now, not doing it no more,
I can't do ANYTHING so show me the door.
I'm waiting to leave, I HATE being me,
I'm not quite the person I wanted to be.
I'm standing up, stop me, I'll punch your face,
I'm reaching for the door and getting out of this place.
My legs are a blur as I reach for the sky,
You won't see me anymore, I'm gone, BYE!
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Wolfareen
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2004-06-22 15:20:12]
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Re: Red Paged Flames
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by Dead_Next_Tuesday on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 03:34:15 PM AEST
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| This's really good. Very well done. Congrats. ^_^ |
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Re: Red Paged Flames
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 03:48:36 PM AEST
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| i thought the pace frantic and well done. it set the tone for an interesting poem |
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Re: Red Paged Flames
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 03:50:42 PM AEST
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great write
pixie xx |
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Re: Red Paged Flames
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by MLCstar on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 08:50:35 PM AEST
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| so full of conflicting ideas and emotions. it keeps bouncing around, just like a real impatient mind would. It even makes me feel unpatient. Great stream of consciousness poem. |
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Re: Red Paged Flames
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 06:01:35 AM AEST
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Mjgrl said it well enough for me.
I'll add 'contradictory' and 'mashed' to the list.
Welcome to YPDC. |
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Re: Red Paged Flames
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 06:02:14 AM AEST
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Or welcome 'back', as it were.
Keep writing. |
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