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Shattered Heart
Contributed by
lovespoetic0518
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 04:03:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Still alone, there is no you,
Misplaced in the chaos,
You blanket the shadows,
An illusion I presume.
Positioned with poise,
Alone to swim in fears,
Your face out of focus.
Exist? If you do,
But a apparition who sneers.
Laughing you must be,
Skeptic, I perceive you to mislead.
Traveling the waves of fate,
You'll find my hesitation a trait.
Don't look so amazed,
Two rich bronze eyes,
Covered in a raging haze.
Prior lovers tore me apart,
But I'll still love you for the need,
We have to begin,
Taming a shattered heart.
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2004-06-22 16:03:04]
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Re: Shattered Heart
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 04:05:57 PM AEST
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I enjoyed this.... and can relate to it. Very well done!
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Re: Shattered Heart
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by Shadow on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 04:15:26 PM AEST
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| I have been here. It hurts. I still go here some days. i love this poem. It hurts but i love it. Great wright! |
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Re: Shattered Heart
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 04:16:09 PM AEST
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awwwww this is very sad, sorry for your pain,
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Shattered Heart
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 04:54:12 PM AEST
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| well done. |
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Re: Shattered Heart
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by PumpkinPie on
Thursday, 1st July 2004 @ 05:53:34 PM AEST
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I'm stunned at how you write such captivating poetry.I enjoy your work to it's full extent and I am looking to reading more from you.Every verse is boundless beauty and your words chosen are mesmorizing.Do keep posting,I am looking forward to reading more,
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Re: Shattered Heart
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by grip-wth-broken-fingers on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 08:33:40 AM AEST
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excellent poem good choice of words i dont noramlly like this sort of poem but it was good thank you xgripx
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Re: Shattered Heart
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by epsftbllchic1617 on
Sunday, 23rd July 2006 @ 09:12:44 PM AEST
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| Great poem, I loved the line "Your face out of focus" it brought an image to my mind of a former love |
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