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Only a Hominid
Contributed by
Bones
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 09:24:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The night resembles my endless dreams I guess I miss you more than it seems I guess I hate being stuck in this machine Everything is no longer completed You were always over the competed You never liked to be seated you always had to be in the game Not once did you bring me shame Not once did we take the blame I am only a hominid I haven't lost my mind How could I be so blind to never ask why why do we have to die I'll never again give a sigh I think I'll lose my sanity Inside of my own insanity I'm looking for serenity I'm only a hominid But I still have my mind I'm no longer blind
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2004-06-22 21:24:24] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Only a Hominid
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:13:03 PM AEST (User
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Just a bit over-rhymed, but then I am only human, LOL. Nice write.
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Re: Only a Hominid
(User Rating: 1 ) by BrandySwanson on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 12:00:46 AM AEST (User
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great write well done
Brandy
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Re: Only a Hominid
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th July 2004 @ 02:46:06 AM AEST (User
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I find it heartening that you managed to get this published. It's well below the standard I would have expected of a publisher's requisites.
Keep writing. And comment more - don't ask for comments if you're not prepared to comment yourself. |
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