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Blame
Contributed by
Sordida
on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 09:48:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Do not blame yourself
Ive always been the one
Whos lived this sad creation
And tried to make it fun
Ive always been depressed
And Im guessing you know why
But its never been your fault
That I felt I want to die
Ill vouch that way until the end
And my skies all turn to black
If I die from cancer
Or the knife thats in my back
Its my secret illness
That has to run its course
Ill swear that nothings wrong with me
And Ill fight it with great force
Ive survived every time so far
And every time to come
And even if I dont
Its my fault for being dumb
Copyright ©
Sordida
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2004-06-22 21:48:28]
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Re: Blame
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by rockerfairy on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 09:59:26 PM AEST
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| very ice breaking poem,I used to feel the same way but it all faded when I realized I wa the holder of my happiness and that I am in contol not y fears or other,live life while its there evrybody has lenty time being dead actually alot more time dead that alive |
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Re: Blame
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:14:43 PM AEST
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Yes - you are right on about the fact that you r emotional state is very much up to you - I hope that for your sake you find that you don't have to fight -
Nice job |
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Re: Blame
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:16:31 PM AEST
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why do they always blame themselves? it makes it that much more obnoxious. and, it makes me feel so much worse when they put it on their shoulders, then I get angry...
hehe, sorry, that was a random rant. but I totally feel ya. I go through those stages, and it would just help if we were able to deal on our own, let us deal.
I love the thematics and the schematics of this poem. it was actually really well written on top of the awesome expression of emotion.
anyways, I really enjoyed it. :0) |
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