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If Only The Knew
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:13:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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If Only They Knew They moan at me for laughing
They mock me when I cry
If I'm showing no emotion
They say they want me to die
If only they knew my pain
They might not be so mean
Inside I'm hurting so, so much
If only it could be seen
Most nights I feel numb
The pain has become so bad
That I can feel it no longer
This life sucks; I think I'm mad
The life I wish I have
Is the life they think I've got
They don't know my life
I act happy, but really I'm not
I'm so different from them
They look no further than the surface
I feel so lonely, scared and sad
I don't wanna die, but you dont understand
I cant go on...my life is to bad
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2004-06-22 22:13:25]
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Re: If Only The Knew
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:36:28 PM AEST
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| i can understand where you are coming from in some of this. people only look and believe things they are afraid or want to believe. |
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Re: If Only The Knew
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by holderofthestone on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:03:55 PM AEST
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| you+ me = same story.... we relate to much and way too often... this is an excellent piece. but like you told me keep you head held high. they will get whats coming to them... A++++ |
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Re: If Only The Knew
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by Luinil on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:50:32 PM AEST
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| really good description of what you're feeling... hang in there, i know what you're feelin' too* |
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