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Breaking Point
Contributed by
essentially9
on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:25:39 PM in AEST
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Breaking Point
Do away with me
Like everything
Make me angry
To do your bidding
To push myself away
You never wanted me to stay
Do away with me
Because I don't need
What you give me
Nothing but grief
And I can't stand it
I've reached the breaking point
It was all because of you
That I have to choose
Lies or truth
You tried to break me
You thought you saved me
You only pushed me away
But I never could stay
Because I knew
That it would come to this
Someday
Do away with me
Like always
Do away with me forever
This day
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2004-06-22 22:25:39]
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Re: Breaking Point
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by SuperAsh16 on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:44:05 PM AEST
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| hardcore, man. in my opinion, it was awesome. keep it up. |
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Re: Breaking Point
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 01:04:41 AM AEST
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this really touched home with me, brilliant and sooo moving, i went through this 6 months ago, won't bore you with the details lol, hugs n' love, nessa
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Re: Breaking Point
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:51:47 AM AEST
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great poem,
pixie xx |
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