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WORDS
Contributed by
xxbreathlessx
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:36:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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words can currupt your insdies or sing a song to your soul how much power these words hold can never be told they can errupt the volcano that blows within you they can Deteriorate the walls that stand strong and true they can shadow wonders or Dreams they can build up crazy schemes they can take your breath away your lungs cant seem to breathe they can drain the insdie of you and just wont seem to leave they can mimic you in every step or chant in your memories they can echo thru hollow sounds or see thier way into the blinded words can make art, a live masterpiece they can make paper more than just a piece of tree words are emotions we say outloud or that chime within our soul how much power these words hold can never be told
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Re: WORDS
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 01:20:09 PM AEST (User
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I like the flow of this. Use some caps, some periods, and it becomes a masterpiece,leaving all breathless.
Very nice write!
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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