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Broken Smile
Contributed by
brokensmile
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Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:43:48 PM in AEST
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its not always rainbows and butterflys
the good times only last awhile
pretending its all good
laughs out and fakes a smile
shes scared of what will happen
if she let them all know
know why her writings like this
know why she feels so low
she knows right from wrong
and she knows this isnt right
she doesnt know what to do
she wishes she could drift away in the night
she knows in time this will pass
dont bad things always do
she just wishes it would pass sooner
she wishes for a life without you
sometimes she feels really down
and she just wants to leave it all and go
go away forever
all because she doesnt know
she doesnt understand
what is going on
why its all confusing
so she wants to just be gone
if she was non exsistant
no one would have to hear
all her complaints and problems
listen to her crying tears
she doesnt know why
you wont just let her be
this broken smile on her face
this broken me
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Re: Broken Smile
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by SuperAsh16 on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 10:54:01 PM AEST
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| thats deep, man. truly awesome. great write. |
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Re: Broken Smile
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:13:09 PM AEST
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brought tears to my eyes, i'm exactly in your shoes right now. a lot of my poems go along that same theme.
great job! i really really enjoyed it.
thanks for sharing! |
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Re: Broken Smile
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by Alyshia on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:28:12 PM AEST
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| that is EXACTLY how i feel right now. good write...very descriptive and very easy for me to relate to. I liked it a lot! |
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Re: Broken Smile
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 22nd June 2004 @ 11:32:30 PM AEST
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| interesting. |
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