|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
what I hide is what I want noone to find
Contributed by
Hearts
on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 12:48:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
A fool is what I have become!
This thought seeing what I have done.
I apologize for I am in pain.
crying my heart out
till the river is full
completing the plan
I thought it would be over
only now the lies begin
as I grow away from me
this is no way to be free
hurting the one who should care
I do not know how to be honest inside
that could be why it is me I cannot find
noone know who I am anymore
until I can open my doors
maybe some day
I will cme out to show the world
and stop hiding from what I allowed myself to become
to some they they think they know who I have become
to others they pray I will let my heart be my guide
until I feel it is the right time
noone will know what mysteries I hide inside
Copyright ©
Hearts
... [
2004-06-23 00:48:46]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: what I hide is what I want noone to find
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 01:09:15 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
this write stuns me as I had jus started my latest WHY DO WE?
but at the same time I was deep in thought and your write pops up next on my putor and I paused to read it.
Very stong, powerfull magic write!
huggs,
emy |
|
|
Re: what I hide is what I want noone to find
(User Rating: 1 )
by the_story_of_the_year on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 01:29:26 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Deep, mysterious. It expresses a feeling without exposing yourself to the world. well done my friend.
-andrew |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
