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My Story's At It's End
Contributed by
TheLastStringCut
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:44:43 AM in AEST
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I can't find my way out of this dream
When nothing is as what it seems
I can't seem to make believe
What I want is what I need
A story often ends
As another one begins
A life, a love, another chapter
A book called life
I scream and scream yet no one hears
Of what I want and what I fear
I wait and wait and feel the day
Slip through my grasp
I try and try to make it through
Another page as they construe
But my next chapter cannot be reached
The next page will not be breached
So I close the cover, fold it over
Lay my book down with the sound
A loud thud as it hits the ground
To lay ripped at my feet
My story's at it's end
I wish I could have stayed
Another week, another day
Another chapter, another page
I tear and tear yet nothing sends
Another page to reveal the end
I weep and weep for the wasted years
For nothing I can get back
I reach and reach for another letter
Something to come up, to makes things better
I want and want for my final chapter
To place me in eternal rest
I can't I can't seem to make it go
The feeling felt when I might as well
Burn and burn in eternal hell
I wish I had one more
Page to go before I reach the end, it's bleak
Suddenly I've became very small and weak
I try and try to grasp one more year
I've become drowned in fear
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Re: My Story's At It's End
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by Avarice_Riot on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 04:47:56 AM AEST
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| Ahhh...these are exactly my type of lyrics. Don't we all know the feeling of uncertainty, never knowing what the future brings and feeling afraid? You've expressed that very well here and I hope you'll get a wicked tune to go with these lyrics. Good luck with your band if it ever comes around. |
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Re: My Story's At It's End
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:04:18 AM AEST
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Written well and certainly depicks your thoughts.
Great job.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: My Story's At It's End
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 06:04:10 AM AEST
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Wow!
I totally loved this piece!
Brilliant!
I loved the flow,
and the meaning and honesty behind it all,
Magnificent piece of work!
good luck with your band!
Katie |
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Re: My Story's At It's End
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by deadbloodyrose on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:38:47 PM AEST
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| oooooooooooo i loved this jeff :) its awesome.. not nearly as awesome as you though.. rawr!! i really liked it though jeff.. it has a lot of meaning and truth behind it.. im glad youre still here though and im SUPER HAPPY that i can call you my own :D you mean sooooooooooooooo much to me.. love always.. AMI JO |
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