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Whisper
Contributed by
frejya
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 06:47:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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When the air smells of love
And the stars grant the shelter
And the heavens bend down
For us to lay upon
And the moon shines brightly
But still keeps it dark
And grants us the vision divine
Of you and little me
Let me whisper,
In the cold wind,
With a sweet tickle,
And a mild scent,
Whisper to you
This feeling tonight.
Copyright ©
frejya
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2004-06-23 06:47:52]
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Re: Whisper
(User Rating: 1 )
by WinterFox on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 06:59:40 AM AEST
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| Very nice, romantic piece, Frejya. Very visual and descriptive. Well done...Mike |
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Re: Whisper
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by Vermillion on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 07:58:49 AM AEST
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such a lovley poem.put a tiny little sparkle deep inside my soul,great write
~vermillion~ |
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Re: Whisper
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:46:33 AM AEST
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awwww this is romantic........ great poem
pixie xx |
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Re: Whisper
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by loveisendless on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:42:03 PM AEST
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NOW THAT WAS NICE! VERY GOOD FREJYA!! I'D SAY IT'S WORTH A 5+!!!
DAN!!!! |
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