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Mighty Hybrid Theory
Contributed by
Bones
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:11:55 AM in AEST
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[Damien]
I was riding around in old Mexico*
I shot some guy in the toe*
[Bones]
Locked in my cage**
Trying to keep in my rage**
Darkness falls across the land of Micheal Jackson***
crawls, the werewolf howl scares the children***
[Damein]
It was a cool night*
I froze my balls off*
[Bones]
My body frozen, like a solid bullet**
Ihate it when you leave me behind**
The vampires hunt for blood as the light***
of a cross blinds the evil dudes***
[Damein]
Across the street I see*
WAIT...I gotta pee*
[Bones]
My mind has become inexorable**
I have no motavation to live**
Nature basks in all it's glory as the evil***
is put away. Never again to see the light of day...***
Copyright ©
Bones
... [
2004-06-23 09:11:55]
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Re: Mighty Hybrid Theory
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:30:42 AM AEST
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mmm, that is weird!
i do like it though. good rhyming! |
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Re: Mighty Hybrid Theory
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by Kusko on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:37:14 AM AEST
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I don't like it
try getting deeper into imagery and having more of one conscious objective.
it's almost like it's trying hard to be wierd.
Not a good feeling.
Plus using the word "balls" kind of ruins a song for me. Sorry, just not appetizing.
Look at Nine Inch Nails or something.
I love thier lyrics.
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Re: Mighty Hybrid Theory
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 09:58:50 AM AEST
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heh, very weird... but ya gotta have some of that every now and then... makes life interesting...
I agree, "balls" is unappealing in this context... but it wasn't a part that you wrote so
keeping that in mind, this is alright. :) |
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