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Just Say No
Contributed by
SweetRhythm
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:26:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Dont make me scream, dont make me shout
Just get this over, you know what its about
If you dont want it this way
Then all you have to do is say
But the worst thing to do is continue on this way
Youll give me nothing that I want
But yet you wont say bye bye
Is that for fear youll make me cry
Because if it is please, Listen up
I cant take it anymore, I need you to reveal the score,
Straight up, no less and no more
I know what it is but for this to end properly
You must first show me the door
I just need closure, I dont ask for anymore
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SweetRhythm
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2004-06-23 11:26:26]
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Re: Just Say No
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:28:52 AM AEST
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awww Corinna, this is a very sad and emotional, thanks for sharing, you are not alone hun...... ((((HUGS))))
Pixie xx |
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Re: Just Say No
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by SnowB on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:38:26 AM AEST
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Oh...my heart goes out to you....I hope you find the closure that you are seeking...very intense piece...wonderfully written..
Lena |
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Re: Just Say No
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd July 2004 @ 03:36:39 PM AEST
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I agree
Interesting and troubling.
PFR |
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Re: Just Say No
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:17:34 PM AEST
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| great write, i can understand in my own little way. |
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