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Untitled
Contributed by
Shadow
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 12:28:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The devils spite The dark ones might The vengeful fire The new born liar Darkness comes Death hums Torch to sky The devils fly Peace is dead Malice fed The brave man dies No one crys One life spent Our will bent An endless cry Emotions lie
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by pixie on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 12:30:33 PM AEST (User
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This was great Shadow, hmmmmm a title maybe Devils Spite? what you think :)
love your poems
pixie xx |
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by yellow_sundragon on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:00:55 PM AEST (User
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Great poem... but I'm at a loss for a title... Devil's Spite sound good to me....
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:07:21 PM AEST (User
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How about...
"No One Cries" ? |
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Re: Untitled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:07:30 PM AEST (User
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How about...
"No One Cries" ? |
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