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Sonnet 23: Panacea
Contributed by
Spenyacer
on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 01:17:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Just too damn many cars on rural ways;
Like excess ice that makes the flavor bland
Theres no time for simplicity of days;
The tide stole all the beauty from the sand
My inabilities had pulled me in
And I, the hart, was blinded by your touch;
But pestilence consumed me in my sin,
And now I see I must escape your clutch
The only panacea in my reach
Is that of freedom; set me from your hold;
And if I can diverge from shell and beach
No longer will I bear the title sold
The remedy I seek is not of norm;
My cure comes in an unexpected form
Copyright ©
Spenyacer
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2004-06-23 13:17:01]
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Re: Sonnet 23: Panacea
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by indiradesha on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 06:04:04 PM AEST
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Thanks for your comment. I've read your pieces and I really enjoyed them. Your sonnets are put together well, and im impressed. Sonnets are so timeless yet "modern" writers rarely utilize the poetic device. I'd love to read more, my email is sre23@yahoo.com. You can email me whenever you want with anything you've written.
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Re: Sonnet 23: Panacea
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:04:24 PM AEST
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| great write. very true. |
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