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~The Invisible Girl~
Contributed by
Rachelle
on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:13:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Everyone's going on with their lives & I don't expect them to stop,
All I want is to be noticed, am I asking for a lot?
I got all of these problems I have to face with everyday,
I feel like breaking down to cry, it wasn't supposed to get this way.
I am always by myself, all alone,
No-one can help me I wish my feelings were known.
I pray that this emptiness will pass,
But it keeps on growing, it's growing so fast.
So what will happen when I finally explode?,
Maybe there will never be another day lived of feeling so alone.
I wish there was another way out, a place for me to be free,
But a place like that only exsist in my dreams.
Oh how I wish an angel would come save me from this world,
Cuz I'm tired of being myself... "The Invisible Girl"
Copyright ©
Rachelle
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2004-06-23 17:13:54]
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Re: ~The Invisible Girl~
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:18:41 PM AEST
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aww...I really want to give you a hug. I've been through this...it was really hard...but I found people who respect me and care about me...you won't be "invisible girl" forever, there's hope :)
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Re: ~The Invisible Girl~
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:19:38 PM AEST
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i can relate to this so much being unnoticed...and thats why I can go on saying Im a suicidal cutter...not something to be proud of...I try very hard to quit my jestures but it only seems to get worse...I liked this write however it flowed very well and the trasitions were amazing keep your head held high...
read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think...
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Re: ~The Invisible Girl~
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:04:42 AM AEST
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awwww sorry you feel this way......you expressed this well.
pixie xx |
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