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Contributed by
carrielynn
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:46:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
AmericanTragedy
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Screams of freedom as I charge ahead
The men that stand on the ground staind red
Whispers of sweet solem prayers for those that fell
Forward we all go with their stories to tell
With each deep breath and every long stride
I go by another that lies in blood and pride
I see the stripes and I see our stars
The victorious glory connot be far
For this country we fought with all our might
Today we shall conquer what is our right
Through the eyes of these men you will see
A great land and her people all free
These are the men who will not march quietly into this night
This is the last day we will fight this fight
Our bounded land is all ours to mold
And we shall have a victory to forever hold
Guts, love and glory in this war we have shed
And tears for those who fought now dead
The price our new world has paid
So our own rules and boundries could be laid
For those who were brought down after they stood so brave
Your glory and our hearts go with you to your grave
You fought for the land of the free and the home of you
So we could fly freely the red, white, and blue
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2004-06-23 17:46:26]
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Re: For Free
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by Xxluckie_lynnxX on
Wednesday, 9th March 2005 @ 07:57:51 PM AEST
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Good job !! the emotions in the poem are very forward .. and you painted a clear picture in my mind .. i think we all need to sit back and remember the ones who risked their lives so we can now be free. ..
Again good write .. and i dont understand why i am the first to post a comment .. i thought it was good ! |
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