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Fading Existence
Contributed by
essentially9
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Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:18:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Fading Existence
Wasting away in my existence
Opening my eyes
To what's not there
Wasting away without a care
Fading away in my existence
Closing my eyes
To what's in front of me
Fading away into nothingness
My existence is no longer there
Diminishing till it got here
I no longer exist
I lost what there was to live
The flame of life extinguished
Nothing to live for again
There is nothing to keep me here
Yet I still live
Wasting and fading away
Till I'm no longer able to exist
Wasting and fading away
Till I open my eyes
To what's really there
I've wasted
I've faded
Into nothingness
My existence
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2004-06-23 22:18:05]
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Re: Fading Existence
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by blueheart on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 10:21:28 PM AEST
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Very nicely written.
You defined existance with in depth perception and emotion. |
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Re: Fading Existence
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 11:21:09 PM AEST
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beautiful expression of feelings:) hugs n' love nessa
@->>->:- |
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Re: Fading Existence
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:41:39 AM AEST
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great write, filled with emotions, great.....
pixie xx |
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Re: Fading Existence
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 10:59:16 PM AEST
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Great poem. It helps me think of faded thoughts and places.
God bless. Peace |
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