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You Raped Me
Contributed by
norticus
on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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You pushed me down. You fed me from your body.
You raped me.
You struck me. You caused me to bleed from my nostril.
You raped me.
You told me I was cute, you said you wanted to marry me.
YOU RAPED ME!
Don't worry your secret is safe and I still love you, I forgive you.
You raped me.
I miss you.
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2002-10-21 07:30:00]
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Re: You Raped Me
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 09:01:54 AM AEST
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| Some people may look at that last line and say "how twisted!" It is but I know the feeling too. Nice write. |
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Re: You Raped Me
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by Lia on
Monday, 21st October 2002 @ 02:01:56 PM AEST
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| Unfortunately..I have to say that I know where these feelings inside of you are...I have been there...like a jail, they grab ahold of you and don't let go...but don't worry..one day, they do let go |
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Re: You Raped Me
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by Twinky on
Thursday, 24th October 2002 @ 10:11:30 PM AEST
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| ok i cant say that i know where these thoughts and feelings are coming from but it is a remarkable poem and as i was reading it i felt as if i was going through the situation..... even though it was short it was still put together well enough to grab my attention and not let go!! thanx for sharing this with us and i hope to hear more poetry from you soon! |
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Re: You Raped Me
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by Kiz on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 08:41:15 PM AEST
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| Great title i have to say. Many mixed emotions in this poem, but you can feel the anger and pain. Great write. Kiz's Scale: 4.25 |
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Re: You Raped Me
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by Kiz on
Saturday, 2nd November 2002 @ 08:41:17 PM AEST
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| Great title i have to say. Many mixed emotions in this poem, but you can feel the anger and pain. Great write. Kiz's Scale: 4.25 |
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