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S*I*N*
Contributed by
reilt
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:31:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Fall away
Into another day
You are sin to my skin
Tempting into ruin
One more confession
I cannot bear to admit
Drag out there
Into the open air
You commit
As do secrets in the dark
Unforgiven
But unrepenting
Slip, slide away
Into the forbidden.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-06-24 15:31:26]
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Re: S*I*N*
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by arden on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:49:28 PM AEST
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short and awesome. i liked it alot.
nicely done. keep it up.
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Re: S*I*N*
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:58:49 PM AEST
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YOU can say SO MUCH with so few words. BRAVO! You have captured the essence of this.
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Re: S*I*N*
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:32:37 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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