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Him...Unwritten
Contributed by
reilt
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:39:58 PM in AEST
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It's the poem that will not form
Denies creation
About the boy
Who saved her skin
The words halt at his touch
The ebb and flow curbed
By his skin melting into hers
It's unsaid, unspoken
Untouched by paper, pen
The feeling he brings
And all else fails her now
But for him
Still unwritten.
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Re: Him...Unwritten
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 03:53:35 PM AEST
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"It's unsaid, unspoken
Untouched by paper, pen
The feeling he brings
And all else fails her now
But for him
Still unwritten."
wow... I love this... short and sweet, great job reilt! |
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Re: Him...Unwritten
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 04:00:30 PM AEST
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Then you know true happiness. It is when I am completely happy and in God's will that I do not write. It is like a tightrope I walk. You have captured that again, is so few words and so well. You are a master at this.
Stitch |
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Re: Him...Unwritten
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 04:15:32 PM AEST
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| very nice write - such power in the unspoken words! |
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Re: Him...Unwritten
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:35:08 PM AEST
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great write...... you have a great knack of expression
pixie xx |
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Re: Him...Unwritten
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by Ina on
Thursday, 8th July 2004 @ 12:12:09 PM AEST
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This line is so great
"The ebb and flow curbed"
I am tattooing it on some part of my body in the near future.
absolutly great poem...!!! |
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