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The Beauty Queen
Contributed by
Dying_angel
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 04:27:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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She was a Beauty Queen
She started at 16
But never to return again
Too wrapped up in the mirror
She couldn't see
What life could be
She thought it too sinister
She tried to stay
Like that to the day
But still they say
Too wrapped up in the mirror
Couldn't see
What it was to be
'Cos it was too sinister
She was wanted
But still she flaunted
An now gaunt dead
Too wrapped up in the mirror
Couldn't see
What was here
It was so sinister
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Dying_angel
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2004-06-24 16:27:18]
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Re: The Beauty Queen
(User Rating: 1 )
by Shadow on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:54:50 PM AEST
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| This was refreshing. Final somthing against the order of things. Yet i can't help but wonder why am i the only one to comment? This was ok. It desreves greater reviews. *Sigh* O well i liked it. |
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Re: The Beauty Queen
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by Essentially9 on
Sunday, 1st August 2004 @ 11:42:31 PM AEST
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| fantastic write. |
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