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Comfort
Contributed by
iluvpencils
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 05:51:38 PM in AEST
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I lie still
Letting the pain wash over me
Silently screaming
Through your voice
This sound
Makes me want to die
Die in your voice
So at least I will die happy
I lie quiet, sobbing
Your tears of comfort
Pouring out through me
I live inside you
Everything about you
Seems sent for my salvation
Crying, dying, screaming
Retreating inside your mind
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2004-06-24 17:51:38]
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Re: Comfort
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 30th June 2004 @ 10:07:07 PM AEST
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what a short little poem just packed with pain. I loved this I guess good things do come in small packages... I think thats about the lamest thing I've ever said.
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