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The Second Coming of Colors in Shades of Green
Contributed by
Diatribe
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:26:40 PM in AEST
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Dust off the impurities that keep you locked in that confessional
Dont feel bad for yourself because you have me to do that for you
A silent sinner lay to waste in dark corners
The one wholl burn forever fictitious
Twenty two years of ember-like memory
Burning their little holes inside of me
And I still dont believe
Ive learned to base my life around childrens fairytales
Not far from your owners manual
So as your heros walk on water
Somewhere theres a wolf dressed like my grandmother
And as your daughter grows old enough to wear red
Ill be the one in sheeps clothing
Desensitized to your beliefs
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Diatribe
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2004-06-24 18:26:40]
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Re: The Second Coming of Colors in Shades of Green
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by yellow_sundragon on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 06:31:02 PM AEST
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| I like this... good write... hehe, and I agree... |
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Re: The Second Coming of Colors in Shades of Green
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by angelav on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:16:25 PM AEST
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| I liked your poem. I agree that 'relligion' has been presented poorly, it does seem silly and cold. For me, God is just love, and is within me. It's in the way I live, not some building or book. Great job. |
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Re: The Second Coming of Colors in Shades of Green
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:27:12 PM AEST
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| i do not believe the bible myself but that insult of calling everyone that believes in it an idiot is a little uncalled for. but other than that excellent poem. |
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