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Window
Contributed by
Luinil
on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:05:38 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Window unopened
Skin of filth covering
Light distorted and shielded
Sticky thread adorns the top
Lifeless creatures sleep in dust
Sounds unseen
Is life or death guarded?
Shapeless exterior, waves of clarity
Dancing or fleeing?
Truth lies beyond glass
Fingers unscathed
Submerged in grime
Clear translucent shield
Moist eyes dart from emerald to blue
Stay safely untouchable or shatter the veil?
Copyright ©
Luinil
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2004-06-24 19:05:38]
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Re: Window
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by pixie on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:23:51 PM AEST
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very deep write......your work always leaves me wanting more
takecare
pixie xx |
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Re: Window
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by Kirby on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 07:51:47 PM AEST
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| i am speechless after I read this. I believe I enjoyed it but your words stole all of my emotions. This was very deep and to intelectual for me. It was great though. Love::::Kirby |
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Re: Window
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:56:37 PM AEST
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oh, i love this, a brilliant poem:) hugs n' love nessa
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