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Forget I exist
Contributed by
Living_In_My_Dream
on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:21:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You were a flame so perfect and tame
I use to appreciate it
when I would say your name
I didnt think it turn out like this
So heartbroken without any bliss
You encountered me sweetly
So mach and cool
To tell you the truth
You seemed like a fool
But I was drawn toward you, and now Im so far
Bring me closer, back in your car
Take me to a secluded beach
Somewhere that I cant be reached
Give me the moon, give me the stars
I dont want to see your shameful scars
You encountered me sweetly
So macho and cool
To tell you the truth
You seemed like a fool
I want to forget you, not know you exist
I love you it hurts like a hit with a fist
Dont tell me you love me, dont say my name
Forget I exist, forget were the same
I wanna receive a call that say your in a coma
I want you to forget I exist
You encountered me sweetly
So macho and cool
To tell you the truth
I think I love you
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Re: Forget I exist
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by xSlashXPrettyXSkinx on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 05:29:33 AM AEST
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Great peom. I can see how it got you published. Liked how it ended. You werent expecting it. Well, hun, this was great. Never stop writing. I love you work.
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Re: Forget I exist
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by pixie on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 06:32:16 AM AEST
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awwww congrats on you getting this published, it is a really great poem
pixie xx |
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Re: Forget I exist
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by hendrix97 on
Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 03:22:34 PM AEST
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| amazin, i absolutely loved it |
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