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Final Bow
Contributed by
perfection
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Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:49:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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What is happening to me?
Everything is starting to show
There is more to me then what you see
Right now, I just don't know
I'm scared that I am going to die
I wish I had someone who understood
I just want to curl up in a ball and cry
But I know I never could.
Perfect is what you used to say
But look at me now.
I live my life day by day
This is the end, here's my final bow.
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perfection
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2004-06-24 22:49:29]
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Re: Final Bow
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 11:17:43 PM AEST
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| powerful emotionally and in structure. |
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Re: Final Bow
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by carmen_queasy on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 04:47:33 AM AEST
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| It's simple and to the point. I like it. |
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Re: Final Bow
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by Trisha on
Tuesday, 21st September 2004 @ 07:17:47 AM AEST
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| Dearest Friend why don't you ask for help. I can feel you reaching out but why don't you get help before it's to late. |
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