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hey you
Contributed by
Sordida
on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:49:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Hey you there, what gives you the right?
To decide to leave me in the dead of night.
Hey you, what happened to us?
What happened to forever? What happened to trust?
Hey you, I remember what you said.
You said you'd never leave me as my cheeks turned red.
Hey you, I remember that night.
You came over with red roses after our first fight.
Hey you, how quickly you forget,
or did you not realize that I loved you a lot
Hey you, In all these thoughts I did drown.
With your roses on top they dropped you coffin down
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Sordida
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2004-06-24 22:49:40]
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Re: hey you
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by Thivanka on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:58:26 PM AEST
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Nice verse, you said a lot within a few lines. Nice work!
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